5 Mart 2009 Perşembe

INTRODUCTION-Thesis Statement: Everybody has some characteristics which nobody knows. I have too. The most important ones are my sensible attitude for nonliving things, speaking to myself, and my inability to watch horror film.

Body Paragraph 1:

Topic Sentence: I am very sensible for nonliving things around me. Something which seems unimportant can be special for me.

A) I am very well at associating things with my memories. So they become all suddenly important for me and I carry them with me wherever I go.

B) If they are lost, I become very unhappy. I feel a very bad hurt in my heart.

C) Among my special things, there is an umbrella, a t-shirt, a doll, a pipe, a piece of plant, a small stone, a dirty handkerchief dirty with blood…

D) It is difficult to believe but I am saving all of them and many others.

Body Paragraph 2:

Topic Sentence: I love speaking to myself a lot. I can’t found any special time; I love it all the time.

A) Sometimes, I feel that something inside me wants to get out. This becomes a voice and it sometimes consoles me, sometimes relieves me, sometimes makes me simile.

B) When I was in high school, a friend of mine found me speaking to myself. She was surprised and laughed a lot. I was ashamed a lot.

C) I love it a lot but other people find it strange. So I try to do it when I am alone.


Body Paragraph 3:

Topic Sentence: I am very bad in watching horror film. In fact I can’t watch horror film.

A) The last time I went to cinema to see horror film was five years ago.

B) I became so affected when I saw my first and last horror film. I was so affected that I couldn’t sleep for nights. It was horrible to be in fears and without sleep.

C) Since that time I haven’t seen any horror film.

Conclusion: I have told my unknown characteristics. They are strange but I love them and myself.

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  1. Your outline looks nice but please keep the suppoting ideas shorter. You don't have to write 2-3 sentences for the supporting ideas. You will write them in your essay. Good luck with the essay.

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